Tuesday 22 September 2020

A day in the life of a Red Panda

We are learning how to write first person.

I woke up just as sun was rising and I started to slide down the tree. I wandered down the path and saw a yummy bush. I thought I would eat it for breakfast. Yum! I climbed back up the tree with my sharp claws with the bush in my mouth then I went back to hiding in the tall tall tree so I was safe from other animals. I destroyed the sticks from the bush because I ate them so quickly. Then I went back to bed and blended in with the trees because my fur is like camouflage.


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  1. Anonymous2 November 2020 at 11:34

    Hi Angus
    I rely like how you chose a red panda maby next time we do a first prison write you could do more fats

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