WALT: We are using punctuation correctly and write in first prison
Once I went to QEll. I slowly walked into the pool. It was to busy so I dragged a doughnut up the stairs to the hydroslide. When I saw the light turn green I went flying down down the slide. It was so fun! I even flipped over. I had to try and get on again. I got on but I was already done so I got off and dived in the deep water. I could even do a front flip under water. Then I got bored so I got home and had a shower.
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