WALT: Write a Haiku poem. It is a poem based on syllables and follows a pattern of 5-7-5
My name is Angus.
Now I like to stay up late.
I like play-stations.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
WALT: Write a Haiku poem. It is a poem based on syllables and follows a pattern of 5-7-5
My name is Angus.
Now I like to stay up late.
I like play-stations.
Rhinos are a large animal that is native to South Africa like all their other family members.
Rhinos have dark grey skin, bulging eyes and big large horns to attack predators. They have have thick skin compared to other animals Rhinos are one of the biggest animals on earth. The females will normally charge at predators to protect their calves. They even kill other people by charging at them. That's why you don't want to provoke one.
They can run up to 55 miles per hour. Rhinos mostly live alone, however sometimes they live in groups.
Rhinos get hunted for their horns. They are very endangered and might go extinct. Especially the white rhino!
I chose to write about rhinos because they are so big and strong. They have thick skin.
At the start of the day room 4 and room 1 lined up at the bus. I was pretty excited to go on a field trip again so I sat down and looked at the view in seconds. We were all ready at Margret Mahy. It felt nice being with my mum. I was so excited playing with Ben and Liam. We went on slides, swings and much more. We walked to the Museum and looked at heaps of games that have been around for hundreds of years. You even got to make your own game out of a little bag of items I was having so much fun. And then we left and took a ride home on the bus.
WALT: We are using punctuation correctly and write in first prison
Once I went to QEll. I slowly walked into the pool. It was to busy so I dragged a doughnut up the stairs to the hydroslide. When I saw the light turn green I went flying down down the slide. It was so fun! I even flipped over. I had to try and get on again. I got on but I was already done so I got off and dived in the deep water. I could even do a front flip under water. Then I got bored so I got home and had a shower.
We are learning how to write first person.
I woke up just as sun was rising and I started to slide down the tree. I wandered down the path and saw a yummy bush. I thought I would eat it for breakfast. Yum! I climbed back up the tree with my sharp claws with the bush in my mouth then I went back to hiding in the tall tall tree so I was safe from other animals. I destroyed the sticks from the bush because I ate them so quickly. Then I went back to bed and blended in with the trees because my fur is like camouflage.