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Thursday, 21 May 2020
The Bear and the Bees.
The bear woke up. He was hungry. Then the bear crawled out of his cave and saw a ground squirrel under a big rock and then the bear went down to the flushing water to go and get a meal. The next day the bear never got angry over a small bee.
The bear should not break the nest. Why did the bear eat leaves. The bear should have got the fish. And I
like that the bear jumped in to the water. I don´t like that he got no food.
Why did the bear get angry over a bee?
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i like the bear and bees post !!!!!!
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